the story of a picture
This
picture already has 19 years old. There is my grandma, my dogs in that time,
and me when I was 1 year old. This photograph is very important to me because I’ve always been very attached to my grandmother and that was the first house I’ve ever lived in.
It was taken a September 18th , as you can see from my dress, by my mom while I was playing with my dogs, lulu and pinta, and I get distracted by the camera.At the back you
can see a shadow on the wall, where it used to be a birdcage, but as my mother
says, one day it fell off and my grandpa ran over it with his car, killing the
little bird inside too (sad :c ).
I
still surprise myself when I see that picture nowadays, because even 19 years
later, my grandma still looks the same! I still have a very good relationship with
her, even we don’t live together anymore, I visit her every Sunday and we lunch
together. i love her very much.



Well done, great text, grammar is almost error free and all the words are adequately used.
ResponderEliminarcorrections:
I get distracted by the camera= GOT
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